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注意：词数：100左右。2. 不要逐句翻译。可适当增加细节使行文连贯。
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
I’m glad to have received your money and gifts. Now I can go to school again. I am very happy and thank you very much. I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts. Thanks to the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great progress in my studies. So our teachers praised me for it and my parents encouraged me. I have made up my mind to study harder than before to learn every subject well. I want to be a scientist in the future. I’m looking forward to seeing you，but I have no chance to go to Shanghai myself. I hope you can post me a photo of yours.
