题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Computer is one of the essential instrument in nowadays. Man is going to use this computer to do they work such as job work, school work or so on. Computer can do so many things that help us find some online information all over the globe. Without computer we cannot know the information just in a few second. If man use computer purposely and don't violate it. Computer and man have positive relationship between each other. Computer needs to control by man and man needs to use computer to do the daily work.