高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live a town where has so mang trees and flowers .I like it very much .In the past,hometown with green trees all around it.and there are many fish in the river.they are play with each other,The house, were small and simple, and the street wasn't big enough so that the cars can't go though . People worked hard all year ,but live hard. Now big changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings, stores and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in the streets. But with the development , pollution is becoming more and more serious. A lot of trees are death, and fish have disappeared .the rersons is dirty water. To tell you the truth, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town more beautiful.I belive if we try our best .the word will be better.