2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些，拼写检查还需加强。

Computer and man Resently,computer has become more and more popular,and more and more people like to use the computer,because computer has lots of advantages. Computer is essention to our life .Now,we can communication with people who is away from us though computer,and we can make friends with foreign people.Howere,we can find job, buy things by the computer.So,computer play an important role in our lifes. Howere,computer also has some disadvandages ,some people are addicted in games, they waste much time to play in the computer,so they don't have much time to work and study.And,there are lots of trick things in the computer, so we usually be tricked by others though we don't konw ways. We should correctly treat the computer,and make full use of the computer.