题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Resently,computer has become more and more popular,and more and more people like to use the computer,because computer has lots of advantages. Now,we can communication with people who is away from us though computer,and we can make friends with foreign people.Howere,we can find job, buy things by the computer.So,computer play an important role in our lifes. Howere,computer also has some disadvandages ,some people are addicted in games, they waste much time to play in the computer,so they don't have much time to work and study.And,there are lots of trick things in the computer, so we usually be tricked by others though we don't konw ways. We should correctly treat the computer,and make full use of the computer.