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I like sports very must .In general , my favorite is Playing football . I fell in love with it every so often. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so exected about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football become my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, I love Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.I hope the future of mine will be better . I belive I must to be a professional football player as my work .