高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Dear editor， I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. With the development of people's living ，more and more people have their own cars. most of us think it good to own a car. Firstly，it's a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation . You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly，it shows that people's live become more and more better，and the country become more and more stronger. It also makes businesses develop faster. But others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and the environment is worst. Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents. and parking cars is another big problem. Maybe people should think carefully before they buy a car. Yours truly， Li Hua