2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(122):成人仪式

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At the Growing-up Ceremony Dear Tom, Hi, I’d like to tell you about our growing-up ceremony for 18-year-old students held in our school yesterday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should serve our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who have brought us up and teachers who have been educating up patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put up nice performances, singing and dancing. We learnt a lot from the activity. I think it is important for us. I will remember the day all my life. Yours， Li Hua