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这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇,但词汇量不大,且存在拼写错误;有效的运用了一些复杂句;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name: Li Ming Sex: Male Date of birth: 15th. June,1986 Marital stauts: Single Job objective: Foreign trade clerk Education background: In July 2008, graduated from University of North and major in English Personal skills: In school period, Each course is excellent, and be good at english listening, specking, reading, writing. The second foreign language is German, have basic Geman conversation skills. Other, be familliar with process of foreign trade. Hobbies: Enjoy basketball, singing and seeing film.