回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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Dear Wangli: time: june 10 I thank of you invite me to your son first brithday party.first i want to your son say happy brithday,i very happy hear about that too.In indition,i really want to join in the party,but ,i so sorry to you,i could't join in your brithday party in june 10th afternoon.Because i have some thing and must go to my compaly.Atully i hope you have fun in the party. I'm appreciate you invite me. your friend Smith