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高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:17浏览次数:4118
要求:
假如你是李华。你的美国笔友  即将随其父母来中国,并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗,请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。
要点如下:
1历史悠久。
2 中国人独有的传统节日。 
3 家庭团圆。
4 共进晚餐。 
5 吃月饼。 
6 赏月。
要求: 
1 词数100左右。
2 可适当添加细节。
3 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

The Midautumn Festival is the traditional festival in China.In this day,people ,espically family members will have a happy get-together.So Chinese people vaule this festival for its important meaning of "reunion".And the mooncake is the symbolic food.It represents the "reunion" just like the full moon. Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the four major traditional festivals. There are evening meal, people who work outside the home have to come back happy. After dinner, people lit lanterns, usually red lanterns round. The children will happily play their toy lanterns. You Yuanyou the moon in the evening, people eating at the same time to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival special foods - cakes. People with the past, look to the future. It is said that there are dragon in the sky, it is necessary to swallow the moon. In order to protect the moon, the children have to come up with a large ring of the dragons away.

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