2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

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It is Wise to Make Friends on Line Nowdays,more and more peole spend most of their time on line.They shop on line, play computer on line and even make friends on line.As for make friends on line,some people think it isn't wise because making friends on the internet is not real and safe but others think it is wise to make friends on line.As for me ,I think making friends on line is wise way if you learn to protect yourself and make use of it. First of all, It is wise to make friends on line to widen you vision and friends' circle.On the one hand ,on the internet you can make friends from different school ,company, area even country.You get more knowledge and cultures from them through communite after making friends with them. On the other hand,you can spend less time than make real life to find a friends.For example, lots of people have a date such as hiking with friends who have the same interest with you.Secondly,it is wise to making friends on line to share mood conviently and apporately.you can tell some unhappy things which worried about you but you can not tell with you nearly friends because of outward.you can not need to have a date with your friends and wast more time to share you bad mood. In conclusion,it is wise way to make friends on line because of it convient and wide.