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On the one hand,the food shortage lead to many people beared hungry.but there are some waste of food in this age.What a shame! On the other hand,the water as well as the food important for us and even more than food.What's worse,water being pullued,so more and moer water avalible. It is important that petect resources.we should used to save food that eat out.At all times place,turn the water swtich and circulate water.such as, after washed cholthes could push WC or clean the floor and so on. Let's save resource,let' do it,for you and foe me.
