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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(12):学习压力

发布时间:2013-07-12 16:44浏览次数:1068
要求:

假如你是李明,你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信,给他提一些建议。


【写作内容】
1.将自己的问题告诉老师和同学,请求得到他们的帮助。
2.不要总想着考试成绩,要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了,这样就会给自己自信。

3.多做运动,运动可以帮助自己缓解压力,并且有助于睡眠。


【写作要求】

用五句话表达全部的内容,并组成一篇连贯的短文。(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入句数);


【评分标准】

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。


Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. …
 
……
Best wishes!
用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Directions: Stress is a natural part of modern life. In this part, you are required to write within 40 minutes a composition of no less than 200 words about "Stress in Modern Life" . You are to state briefly the relationship between stress and modern life and the different attitudes towards stress. At the end of your composition you should draw your own conclusion. Stress in Modern Life. As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are always feeling on the go from morning till night. And it is hard to slow down. It seems to us that everyone around us is aggressive. Therefore, whatever one does, he feels under stress all the time. It is clear that stress has much to do with the life in a competitive society. Different people, however, think of stress quite differently. Some believe that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the opinion that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose to life. Others argue that stress contributes to one’s mental decline and hence endangers his health. According to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body. Personally, I’m in favor of the former view. I think it is impossible to avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues. In my opinion, it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor performance and ill health.

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