小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is my best friend, she comes from America, she is a beautiful girl ,she has green eyes and brown hair ,she is very helpful, she can do the dishes ,she can sweep the floor, she can water the flowers . she is a clever girl , she is good at maths ,she can play the computer game and chess, she can swimming.