回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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此篇作文应为回复邀请的信函。在这类信函中要注意信的格式。时间应该写在右上角,称呼应顶格并首字母大写。正文要写清楚应邀还是拒绝,若拒绝,要写清楚理由,并向邀请人致歉。
单词拼写做的很好,但文中词汇表达贫乏;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Dear Wangli: time: june 10 I thank of you invite me to your son first birthday party.First i want to your son say happy birthday,i very happy hear about that too.In indition,i really want to join in the party,but i so sorry to you,i could't join in your birthday party in june 10th afternoon.Because i have some thing and must go to my company.Atully i hope you have fun in the party. I'm appreciate you invite me. your friend Smith