小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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we have a new English teacher, her name is lily, she have two big eyes and a big red mouth, she has brown hair, she likes wears skirt, she is slimming. Today, we have English class, we are very happy and it's very fun, we like our new English teacher very much.