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Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel.This novel is called "The Million Pound Banknote" written by Mark Twain.The story of a USA poor boy Henry Adams in London adventure. A London two millionaire bet, put a piece of broken million check to Henry, see him how close in a month. A month later, Henry not only not starve or arrested, but became a millionaire, and won the love of a pretty lady.Writer is Mark Twain.
