初中英语命题作文真题演练(39):我的爱好

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Jenny， Thank you for your last letter．You asked me to tell you something about my hobby．Wellmy favorite hobby is dance. See me when I was very small TV those brothers and sisters dance feeling pretty so I decided to learn dance now I have been studying for 5 years. I enjoy dancing makes me happy. hen the school literary activities when I always take an active part in. I can obtain excellent results in the competition. Dance let my spare time is more abundant, let my body is getting better and better. I like dance。