高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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Now more and more people have their own car，some people think cars are convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation.also can reflects the national living conditions improve, the country rich and strong，Driving the development of other industries. But others think car make serious air pollution.Then affects the traffic car too much, lead to more accidents.