文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear John Thanks for your letter of inviting me to your home to have dinner with your family. You know I have wanted to your home for a visit for long time. However, I am really sorry that I couldn’t go tomorrow because I have something to do. There will be an important test the day after tomorrow, so I have to prepare for it. I believe that you will have a great time with your family ,and I think I should go your home next time . Hope you have a great time! Yours li h