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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。
when it comes to whether we should spend our money carefully,different oppions may appear.some think that it is not necessary to spend it carefully,while others strongly believe that we should use money wisely.in my mind,we should use it properly.the followings are my reasons: firstly,as a freshman,we can't make a lot of money.we get money from our parents.it's not so easy for our parents to make it.secondly,it's also a best chance to foster money-managing habit.learn how to buy something.learn how to manage your money.what's more ,it's a good habit for us to inherit the morality to save money.we should do what we can to save money,because there are many poverty-stricken villages that need our help.so if we can save more money,we can help a lot. considering what i had mentioned above,it's obviouely need for us to save money.so we can do it right now.when we buy something,use something,just bear in mind that we should use money carefully and wisely.
