单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
ear John Thanks for your letter of inviting me to your home to have dinner with your family. You know I have wanted to your home for a visit for a long time. However, I am really sorry that I am missing the chance that will have a great time with your family, because I could not go your home that day. The reason why I could not go your home is there will be an important test the day after tomorrow. So I have to prepare for it. I believe that you will have a great time with your family ,and I think I should go your home next time . Hope you have a great time! Yours li hua