高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

I live in a small city.When it was a countryside,the ground over green,trees were strong and decorated the countryside to be a sea.river is so clean that we could see fish play with each other.Although the houses were simple and crude,roads were narrow,people were poor.People were good and honest,we could get well along with each other,everyone have a happy life. As time goes by,the houses are growing tall and multipurpose，roads are becoming wide and cards can run on them fast and freely,factories are built up and them discharge some smelly gas.It cause environment become bad.For example,trees are cut down,green is small and small,river is dirty,fish can't live even die,city hardly wait to change the situation. I could never touch the happy life.