高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Dear visitors Welcome to our city ,I'd like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Provinces which in the southeast of China. It has about 5 million people here. The city has a history of over 2,400 years, in the old days，There was once the capitals of ten dynasties. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of interesting places , such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming and the Stone City. It also has many factories and high buildings and so on. I'm believe you will have fun playing here.We are waiting for you.