2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Now,can we find a person who is online shopping? Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities and development of internet technology. Online shopping is welcomed by most people to select. From the consumers,it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time or who is crazy , Just open the competer and click the mouse,they can get what they want to buy when stay at home. For the people who sale something,it can cut some costs for those who don't have much money, However,there are still some wrong in online shopping. First,face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable . Second,people will lose the fun of bargain. It sure that shopping on the internet has become a way in modern cities. we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.