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Notice I decide to visiting Qinglong County Forestry Farm.Ittinerary : firstly, the manager have a brief introducion about the farm at 8:30 am.Secondly,you can visit the farm at 9:30 am.Third,you can visit farm-run company.Fourth, you have to Be a guest to farm at 11:30 am.If you want to join us,you can let me know before visit farm starting at 6:00 am.Aually i must tell you ,the car will be start at 6:40 am.