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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Now the Internet is more important and has played an important role in our live.By the Internet, it's easy to get the information from Internet that we need, improving our study and work. It is helpful for us to do somethings. However, some of the people think that the Internet has a bad effect of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some bad things from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last they are away from the study. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it.we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively,and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.

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