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In our life .We may find ourselves by a sea of disposable plastic bags. And recently the problems of using disposable plastic bags have been brought into people life. the use of disposable plastic bags cause our environment. As these bags are not biodegradab, they are causing water pollution. What’s more, customers using disposable plastic bags may think that they are of great convenience. But what they don’t quite realize is that there will be not good on our health. effective measures have been taken in our country. There has been a strict Problem on the using of disposable plastic bags in supermarket。I think use less plastic bags will help us to live better