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If I had a million dollars, I would put less of them in the bank for my future life, I'd just watch it grow.Then I'd give most of them to others.First of all, I would give some to charity.I think it's a good thing.Then I would give some to my hometown to build a hope school.Next I would give some to medical research because I want us to be healthy.Then I would spend some of the money traveling around the world.At last, I would buy a big house for my parents to show my love.
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