2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:患难朋友才是真正的朋友

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

Ways of making friends Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. First of all, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you always sure to get a smile in return. You should think more of others than of yourself and try your best to make a stranger fell at home. Think as you are in his position. Try to remember others' names, which will make them fell that they have made an impression on you. If you don't agree with others,don't argue but discuss with them. Finally,don't believe those who leave their friends when they are in trouble because “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”