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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:45559
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the graph,Bureau of lobor statistics ,current population survey.we can easily know that education has closely relation with employment.Therefore,haaving a good education means having a better life in the future. As we can seen,the higher education people the have,the higher earning they get.The dates shows us that people less than high school diploma would get the low pays $451,which down the average pay $797.On the contary ,people who have doctoral degree would get $1551.Besides,the unemployment rate people with higher education will lower than those with lower education. In conclution,education plays a significiant role in our life ,which relates to our payment high or low .Therefore ,under no circumstances should we ignore the importance of getting a good education.Only after we receive a better education can we live a happy and colorful life.

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