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I love sport.Playing football is my favorite sport. I fell in love with football by accident.One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so happy,because I could play it with my friends.Since these happened football as a family to me. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train how to play football,and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our football skills. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.