高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Football is my favorite sprots.I didn't know it until I picked up one by chance.It was long time ago,one day ,on my way home.I saw a round ball lying on the road.Of course I have no idea what exactly it is .But since that day ,I was deeply in love with football.I and my friends played it all the time .And with the increased practice,our technology has also become better and better day by day.So far,I've beacome a comprehensive technical player.I always believe that I will become a professional player in my life.Just like my favorite football star,David Beckham.So ,Let' fight for our own dream.I believe I can fly!