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题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Nowadays,young people choose to make a call to each other rather than writing letters. But even if so,I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones,though we have stepped into the Information Age. Firstly,letters can express your subtle feelings. With the increase of the living pace of modern society,we find that there is a lack of communication now. Sometimes when you are speaking to someone that you care and love on the phone,you are so shy that it’s too hard to express any of your feelings towards him/her. Your throat seems to be blocked! At this time,letters will help you. Without any embarrassment,you can just write down your deep concern and love on a piece of paper. When you drop the letter into the pillar-box,you will feel what he/she will receive is not only a letter,but also your deepest love. People who receive the letter will be the happiest people in this world. Secondly,letters can be kept as a record of memory,while phones cannot. Just imagine when you open an old box of letters and read them years later,a lot of beautiful and indelible memories will be brought back to you. How beautiful it is!What an irreplaceable feeling it is! And I believe that this kind of feeling is something that you can definitely never experience through several phone calls. All in all,letter writing will absolutely survive in the Information Age. Phones can never kill it,neither will anything.