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Dear John Thanks for your letter of inviting me to your home to have dinner with your family. You know I have tended to your home for a visit for a long time. However, I am really sorry that I am missing the chance which will have a great time with your family, there will be an important test the day after tomorrow. So I have to prepare for it. That;s why I could not go your home. I believe that you will have a great time with your family ,and I think I should go your home next time. Hope you have a great time!