2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(7): My Great Father

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My Great Father Of all my beloved persons, Father is the one who has a deeper influence on my life. He loves me and my brother and is strict with us. He always inspires us to think for ourselves and put forward questions that are difficult to handle. He willingly helps us out with his broad knowledge and lasting patience. With his help and encouragement, we’ve learnt how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful sea of “knowledge” he leads us to! ccooｃo.net.cne Father is also our spiritual stay. Every time we are in trouble and on the point of losing heart, he is in time to help us regain self confidence and give our support in every possible way. He is more a best friend than a father. Besides, Father is highly respected by our neighborhood because he contributes more to community service. In a word, such is Father, a loving, warm-hearted, caring and contributing person. No father in the world can match him, personally.