题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
With the past decade ,our world has witnessed a huge development in science and information technology .So we can say that our world has stepped into a information age. The computer is playing a significant role in this industry when it comes to the information age. Computer has exerting profound influence on the way we live,work and study.People in all walks of life admit that people can not enjoy a wonderful life without computer. Using computer and Internet,people can find a job quickly, doing oversea business easily and can communicate with other person from different counties.So we can say that through computer and internet,our world became a close association.However, some social researcher pointed out that computer can not help people to build a close relationship. on the contrary,it is as the main sources for the people's pressure and isolated. What should be done to use the computer suitably? For one thing , the press is expected to guide the public to better the utilization of computer. For another thing,citizens are supported to make best use of the computer. Only in this way, can we enjoy the advantage of computer to the uttermost.