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高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:20浏览次数:2078
要求:
随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车,你班同学就此展开了一次讨论,提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,
客观介绍这两种看法。 
赞同者认为:
1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具;
2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强;
3.带动其他行业发展。
反对者认为:
1.废气污染严重;
2.过多则影响交通,导
致更多事故;
3.停车问题日益突出。
注意
1.信的开头已为你写好;
2.词数:100左右;
3.参考词汇:方便的 convenient;交通 transportation
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear editor My name is Earl.With the development of people's condition,more and more families have bought cars.Nevertheless,with the development of the automotive industry,more problems have been brought to our life.I and my classmates had a discussion of car problems. First of all.Many classmates pointed out the advantages of cars.They thought cars are convevient and fast,they are comfortable transportations.And then,they said car is not only a kind of transportation,but also a sign if one country is strong enough.At last,they said cars can make the other industries develop faster. However,if there is applaud,there must be opposition.The other classmates strongly disagree their points.The thuoght car is a murderer which destoryed enviroment.They said that car is the source of exhaust gas.And more an more cars could make triffic accident take place more frequently.Finally,they pointed out the problem of parking lot,too many cars will make this problem more and more serious. In my oppinion.I agree with the first group,because our society has been in development.And there is nothing can stop it.What we need to do is to design a kind car which cleaner and safer.

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