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Environment problem is not a fresh talk in recent year. how should human faced with this problem?different people hold on different opoinons. A mount of people insist it's too late to make a stragate on sloving the environment problem. You may see the frog all the day and night ,altough our goveronment make a large number of policy to prevent people break environment again.The life style of human had changed so much ,we could not came back the day that we don't have cars,or don't use chemistery subjects in our daliy life. However ,it is a saying "Never too old to learn ,never too late to turn".Most of people considered that if we try our best to protect our environment ,it will be more better.such as we can go for a walk to go to work instead of drive the car or decrease tiems we use the light and so on.It is a long journey for us ,but the key of instruction is insist. On my own opoinon, to protect environment is never too late ,and it is a work we should do every time or every where,when we are working ,we can refuse to waste of electronic ,on our way to home we can pick up the letter on the ground ,if every one do like that ,our environment will be better one day not so far.
