初中英语命题作文真题演练(72):来中国旅游

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Hello , everyone ! Let me introduce my friend Tony to you . Tony is from England . He is 22 years old . He is studying in a university . He likes sports very much . He can play football well and he also likes traveling . Last winter , when I was visiting the Great Wall , I met him . Since then , we often write to each other . We are good friends now . Last week , he came to China again . He hopes to meet more Chinaese friends . So I introduce him to all of you . I hope we can get on well with each other . And Tony is planning to climb Mountain Tai this summer . I hope he will have a good time in China . That’s all . Thank you