初中英语命题作文真题演练(69):长大后

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Many people want to make their new ideas and wishes come true．They want to invent some new things for the world． In my opinion the most admirable employment is inventor.I hope I can be one of them in the future． Inventions can change the world．They can bring fun and happiness to our life．And our life will become better and better．Now I'm still a middle school student．I must try my best to work hard at my lessons and learn what my teachers teach us．Ten years later,I will use my inventions to make a contribution to our country．