初中英语命题作文真题演练(41):My holiday

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Last summer, I went to Dalian for my holiday. That's a beautiful city,I stayed there for 7 days. This year I plan to spend my summer holiday on sports,because sports is good for our health. If you ask me what my favorite summer holiday will be like, traveling around the world is the only answer. I like traveling so much that I often meet different people and visit different places of interest in my dream.