2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

From the graph,we can easily know that education has closely relation with employment.Therefore,having a good education means having a better life in the future. As can be seen,the higher education people the have,the higher earning they get.The date shows us that people less than a high school diploma would get the low payment $451,which down the average pay $797.On the contrary ,people who have a doctoral degree would get $1551.Besides ,people with higher education ,their unemployment rate will lower than those with lower education. In modern life ,the competition between people and people is so bitter.There is no doubt that education has great influence on employment and payment.So,those who have higher education means closing to success more. In conclusion,education plays a significant role in our life ,which relates to our payment high or low .Therefore ,under no circumstances should we ignore the importance of getting a good education.Only after we receive a better education can we have a bright future.