作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home.I felled surprised. I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I frequently play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games for improve our skills. Among all the football stars, My favorite football player is Beckham . It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.