2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nowadays, more and more students lack a strong will.As old saying that " where there is a will, there is a way". You may notice this phenomenon that you do something,perhaps you lost patience.Moreover, success belongs to have strong will person. It's of vital importance for me to have a strong will. We can reap the benefit from knowledge.Besides, if you want to be successful person ,you must learn to persist. The old saying that "no pains ,no vains‘。 it's necessary to stengten the ties success and will. As a college student, we should learn to work hard ,and pay attention to study. For one thing,if you want to fing a perfert job when you graduate, what's important is that you have patience and persistance. For another, oterwise one has no strong will, they wouldn't achieve success.