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2000年专四作文真题:课外活动的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:16浏览次数:3543
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Direction:College life should be varied and colorful. And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard. Write an article to the university radio entitled:The importance of extracurricular activities
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You shuttle between vocabulary tables and chemistry equations like a painstaking Puritan, axis of life joining only the classroom and dormitory, and then you risk being called "bookworm" at best and "geek" mostly. The fact is, outside the chalkboard and tomes there is a need for something complementary yet critical. For one thing, extracurricular activities animate your body. Intensive study and sedentary lifestyle have taken a toll on the well-being of many students. Myopia being a national epidemic, we see our youth wearing appalling glasses. Lack of exercise leaves millions suffering from overweight, if not obesity. However, in extracurricular activities you stretch your muscle and spare some time for your body. May it be a stroll in the park or 2 hours’ workout in the gym; these activities revitalize you and keep you in shape. For another, extracurricular activities refresh your mind. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Without something ”extra”, school courses amounts to unbearable toil and moil and everyday degrades to a miserable repetition of yesterday’s routine. The inevitable consequence is stifled imagination, staled thoughts and numbed senses, and we are doomed to become a group of bigoted scholars responsive only to impersonal dogmas. Extracurricular activities actually expose you to a world full of new experiences. You get to know people, visit places and develop skills. Through excursions and parties, social investigations or community work, you gradually are molded into a sociable extrovert receptive to new ideas with a wide prospective. In conclusion, extracurricular activities are an essential in that it ensures a more satisfying existence, both physically and mentally.

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