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Jan.16 FridayCloudy I went to school as usual this morning. When I came into the classroom, I saw the classmates were all talking about the window that was broken by someone last night. They thought it was Tom who broke the window because Tom was very naughty in class. I thought it was unfair to Tom. We can't say it must be Tom only because he is naughty. I don't think Tom had the time to do it since he went with me to see a film last night. We should judge something according to the fact.