学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Recently, traditional Chinese culture has become a hot topic.More and more people who reap the benefit from Chinese culture and highlight study.However,this behavior has been brought into focus. There are various reasons responsible for this phenomenon.For one thing ,it bebefits from people who attach less important to learn traditional Chinese culture.It is necessary to stengthen the ties study and culture.Most important of all, the returning of traditional Chinese culuture has advantage of developing countryang make our country stronger. As a college student,in my perspective.,on the one hand, we should put emphasis on traditional Chinese culture ang appeal to more stuaent to learn; on the other hand, it calls for the joint effort to help students pay attention.