文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
April 20, 2004 Tuesday Fine This morning, after I finished my homework, I decided to go to the cinema to see a film. I was about to arrive at the cinema when I found a foreigner standing on the side of the road, looking nervous. Then I came up to him to see what was the matter with him. However, neither of us could understand each other. As last we both made ourselves understood with the help of body language. The foreigner wanted to go to the People’s Park. I stopped a taxi and told the driver to drive the foreigner to the People’s Park. Then I want to the cinema and enjoyed myself there. Oh,today is very wonderful.